Dumping my stuff that's Whinnypeg related.

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Finished it. Would like some feedback.

Verzi wrote:

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Finished it. Would like some feedback.

It's looking pretty good, but make the smoke darker, because I thought it was just shading at first.

Lord CoffeeSpanker wrote:

Verzi wrote:

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Finished it. Would like some feedback.

It's looking pretty good, but make the smoke darker, because I thought it was just shading at first.

Thanks! How's this look? (Oh and it kinda cuts off the picture so you might have to click on it to see a full view. Guess I just make em too big haha)

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Verzi wrote:

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Finished it. Would like some feedback.

I feel kinda bad for critiquing, since I don't draw (very well) and am not really one to pass judgement.
But... Promontory in the window looks kinda flat. Like there's no depth.

Verzi wrote:

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Finished it. Would like some feedback.

For flat colors it's okay by now.

On the other side of things I agree with coffee, the Prom in the train looks a little flat, I know you don't shade so you can add depth maybe by moving the inclination of the line inside the wagon or rotating prom to look
a little more ahead, adjusting the direction of his body, so you can see both of his eyes and the front of his body.

Anyway that's just my idea, you're free to do what you think is best.

Cheers.

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:

Verzi wrote:

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Finished it. Would like some feedback.

For flat colors it's okay by now.

On the other side of things I agree with coffee, the Prom in the train looks a little flat, I know you don't shade so you can add depth maybe by moving the inclination of the line inside the wagon or rotating prom to look
a little more ahead, adjusting the direction of his body, so you can see both of his eyes and the front of his body.

Anyway that's just my idea, you're free to do what you think is best.

Cheers.

Yep, I'll get on that. Thanks everyone for the critique! I'll give it my best

This is surprisingly annoying. Does this look better?

Added shadowing and think I solved the cardboard cutout crisis! OH, and I added the hair from the front. Click on the image for the full view.

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Verzi wrote:Added shadowing and think I solved the cardboard cutout crisis! OH, and I added the hair from the front. Click on the image for the full view.

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Yes, that looks much better!

Full version is here. Also easier on the eyes, in my opinion.

http://verzi-9.deviantart.com/#/d4wgtr4

Hey, did you say, PONIES!!!!!!!!!!

OF COURSE NOT. THAT'D BE BARBARIC.

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Weird black background. Better here! http://verzi-9.deviantart.com/#/d4zds2i

Oh, I thought you said ponies....

Dulset is pleased with Verzi's tasty drawings

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:

Dulset is pleased with Verzi's tasty drawings

SO CUTE *dies*

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:

Dulset is pleased with Verzi's tasty drawings

Maan, I can't wait until it's all done. It'll be grand!

While I was at work, I managed to sneak my sketchbook and finished my last drawing for this thing, It's obviously a basic draft, everything else I plan to add digitally (like cropping too). I used the scanner here at work lol.





Not seen here is Canyum, whom I'll have to pleasure of adding later making a YEAHHH!!!!!!!! pose

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:While I was at work, I managed to sneak my sketchbook and finished my last drawing for this thing, It's obviously a basic draft, everything else I plan to add digitally (like cropping too). I used the scanner here at work lol.





Not seen here is Canyum, whom I'll have to pleasure of adding later making a YEAHHH!!!!!!!! pose

That's looking pretty darned good! I'm loving it! Can't wait to see it finished. May I ask what you use to digitally colour and stuff?

Lord CoffeeSpanker wrote:

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:While I was at work, I managed to sneak my sketchbook and finished my last drawing for this thing, It's obviously a basic draft, everything else I plan to add digitally (like cropping too). I used the scanner here at work lol.





Not seen here is Canyum, whom I'll have to pleasure of adding later making a YEAHHH!!!!!!!! pose

That's looking pretty darned good! I'm loving it! Can't wait to see it finished. May I ask what you use to digitally colour and stuff?

Adobe Illustrator Cs5, darn good program, got it as a gift from my friend (BFF), I also use photoshop for cropping and resizing purposes

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:

Lord CoffeeSpanker wrote:

Prince Bluelolz III wrote:While I was at work, I managed to sneak my sketchbook and finished my last drawing for this thing, It's obviously a basic draft, everything else I plan to add digitally (like cropping too). I used the scanner here at work lol.





Not seen here is Canyum, whom I'll have to pleasure of adding later making a YEAHHH!!!!!!!! pose

That's looking pretty darned good! I'm loving it! Can't wait to see it finished. May I ask what you use to digitally colour and stuff?

Adobe Illustrator Cs5, darn good program, got it as a gift from my friend (BFF), I also use photoshop for cropping and resizing purposes

Ah, I've only got Photoshop and Paint Tool SAI. Take aaages to draw over the lines of the drawing you've just done. Might try and get Illustrator or something soon. Depends.

Are you using a tablet with Sai?, because that makes it insanely fast with the correct brush and settings, if you have photoshop, you can always use the pen tool (though Illustrator is better at that, because it has more line manipulating tools), but I warn you, if you're not used to it, you'll take AGES to finish something, but if you're using a mouse it's your best bet.

But of course, shading something like this one I made:



Is really difficult with just a mouse, that's why I have to leap on a bamboo soon...

With this I finally finished this project, took me around 3 months (sorry for that) I'll just wait for Canyum to be available so I can wrap the rest of the things that he's missing...



Dulset isn't pleased because her face is being obstructed, lol.

Have a nice rest of the week comrades, I'll be hiding getting one pf my personal projects ready